#Pg70Pit Editing Specials
Voice can be HARD.
You’ve got great characters, you’ve got a great plot—but how can you get your words to sing? How do you take sentences and turn them into something that draws the reader into your story?
In the #pg70pit contest, the winners I shared are all vastly different. Every one of them is a different genre, a different style, and a different reason for being a strong voice. When the dust settles after this weekend’s celebrations, I’ll talk about some of the things I liked about them.
First, let’s talk about you.
Maybe your entry made the playlist but didn’t wind up on a blog this morning. Maybe you didn’t even place. In either case, I know you’re probably wondering what you can do better next time.
Don’t give up! Practice makes perfect, and practice is how you’ll grow into your unique voice and work out the bumps in your style.
Can I help you with that?
For all #pg70pit participants, I’m offering the following deals for the next 7 weeks (until August 26th):
7 pages for $47 (LINE EDIT & VOICE ANALYSIS)
If you just want to know how your voice sounds and how to make it better, this deal is for you. As part of the line edit, I will copyedit for errors, give style suggestions, and analyze voice in your word choice and sentence structure. The 7 pages must not exceed 2k words.
70 pages for $87 (CRITIQUE & VOICE ANALYSIS)
If you want to know if your voice and content are headed in the right direction, this deal is for you. This critique is an exception to my typical rule about only critiquing full manuscripts. As part of this critique, I will give you comments after each chapter as well as an analysis letter with feedback on your characterization, pacing, dialogue, descriptions, etc., including suggestions on strengthening your voice. The 70 pages must not exceed 20k words.
70 pages for $347 (LINE EDIT & VOICE ANALYSIS)
If you want to know if your writing is clean and accurate and get some feedback on strengthening your voice, this deal is for you. As part of the line edit, I will copyedit for errors, give style suggestions, and analyze voice in your word choice and sentence structure. The 70 pages must not exceed 20k words.
+7 pages (ADD-ON FOR CRITIQUE)
If you want a full critique of your manuscript as well as some constructive responses to your voice, this deal is for you. My manuscript critiques ($0.005/word) come with a letter analyzing plot, pacing, characterization, dialogue, descriptions, continuity, clarity, & error patterns. I also leave chapter-by-chapter comments in the manuscript itself. For everyone mentioning #pg70pit and their code name when booking a full manuscript critique, I’ll add on the 7-page line edit & voice analysis at no extra charge. The bonus 7 pages must not exceed 2k words.
Please mention #pg70pit and your code name when booking any of these deals. Deals are valid as long as you book by August 26th, so you’ll still get the deal even if spots fill up quickly.
You can get in touch with me HERE to book your spot or find out more. Let me know if you have any questions! I’m excited to spend more time working with the #pg70pit community.